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Jen Kim

Can any Vietnamese help me to correct below translation? I used Google translator and I'm not sure how it sound to native Vietnamese..Thank you so much!!

T么i mu峄憂 gi峄沬 thi峄噓 b岷 th芒n m矛nh v脿 c么ng ty c峄 ch煤ng t么i ***. *** L脿 m峄檛 c啤 quan l脿m vi峄嘽 膽瓢峄 c岷 ph茅p n岷眒 峄 Columbia, Maryland, chuy锚n v峄 tuy峄僴 d峄g v脿 膽岷穞 ng瓢峄漣 lao 膽峄檔g n瓢峄沜 ngo脿i v脿o c么ng ty Hoa K峄 qua nh岷璸 c瓢 Vi峄嘽 l脿m-Based visa (EB-3) category. Th么ng qua qu谩 tr矛nh l脿m vi峄嘽 n脿y, c谩c 峄﹏g vi锚n / lao 膽峄檔g n瓢峄沜 ngo脿i c贸 th峄 c贸 膽瓢峄 th岷 xanh v末nh vi峄卬 c峄 h峄.

*** C贸 h峄 膽峄搉g v峄沬 nhi峄乽 nh脿 tuy峄僴 d峄g M峄, nh峄痭g ng瓢峄漣 c贸 t矛nh tr岷g thi岷縰 lao 膽峄檔g v脿 t峄 l峄 kim ng岷h c谩n ph霉 h峄.
Trong h啤n 25 n膬m, ng瓢峄漣 s峄 d峄g lao *** 膽茫 gi煤p tuy峄僴 d峄g v脿 ki岷縩 鈥嬧媙gh峄 cho c么ng nh芒n c贸 tay ngh峄 v脿 lao 膽峄檔g ph峄 th么ng 膽峄 膽谩p 峄﹏g nhu c岷 lao 膽峄檔g c峄 h峄. *** 膼茫 mang l岷 h啤n 20.000 ng瓢峄漣 lao 膽峄檔g v脿 gia 膽矛nh h峄 t峄 H脿n Qu峄慶 v脿 Trung Qu峄慶 膽峄 l脿m vi峄嘽 v脿 sinh s峄憂g t岷 Hoa K峄 C么ng ty ch煤ng t么i v脿 ch峄 s峄 h峄痷 c贸 m峄檛 trong c谩c h峄 s啤 theo d玫i l芒u nh岷 trong ng脿nh c么ng nghi峄噋 n脿y.

*** 膼ang m峄 r峄檔g kinh doanh sang Vi峄噒 Nam v脿 mu峄憂 膽瓢峄 h峄 t谩c v峄沬 c谩c c啤 quan c贸 uy t铆n t岷 膽峄媋 ph瓢啤ng cho c谩c qu谩 tr矛nh tuy峄僴 d峄g.

Ch煤ng t么i mong mu峄憂 膽瓢峄 nghe t峄 b岷 v脿 hy v峄峮g cho m峄檛 m峄慽 quan h峄 膽么i b锚n c霉ng c贸 l峄.

狈岷縰 b岷 c贸 b岷 k峄 c芒u h峄廼, xin vui l貌ng li锚n h峄 v峄沬 ch煤ng t么i.

Original message:
I鈥檇 like to introduce myself and our company, *** Corporation (鈥 *** 鈥).听 听 ***听 is a licensed employment agency located in Columbia, MARYLAND, specializing in recruiting and placing foreign workers into U.S. Companies via the Employment-Based immigration (EB-3) visa category.听 Through this employment process, these applicants/foreign workers may obtain their permanent green cards.

*** has contracts with multiple U.S. employers who have labor shortages and a consistent rolling turnover rate.听
For over 25 years, IDI has helped employers recruit and petition for skilled and unskilled workers to satisfy their labor needs.听 听***听 has brought more than 20,000 workers and their families from Korea and China to work and live in the U.S. Our company and owner has one of the longest track records in this industry.

***听 is expanding its business to Vietnam and would like to partner with local reputable agencies for the recruitment process.听

We look forward to hearing from you and hope for a mutually beneficial relationship.

Should you have any questions, please feel free to contact us.

See also

Job offers in VietnamWorking in VietnamSetting up a business in VietnamWorking in HanoiWorking in Ho Chi Minh CityRecruitment Agencies in VietnamHead Hunters in Vietnam
wildnfree

I'm interested in your idea of translating by google and asking for support in this blog. Sush a wise way.

As a Vietnamese person, I just revise your google translate text to make it sound more Vietnamese. Believe me, it is now like a piece of writing of a native Vietnamese.

What I concerned here is the meanings of two terms in your writing, which are:
- a consistent rolling turnover rate: --> I just translate it to a more general meaning "doanh thu 峄昻 膽峄媙h", which means a consistent turnover.
- one of the longest track records in this industry ---> I think you means "a long time working in this industry", so I translate to what I understand.

btw, your company introduction seems really attractive to me.

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T么i xin tr芒n tr峄峮g gi峄沬 thi峄噓 b岷 th芒n m矛nh v脿 c么ng ty c峄 ch煤ng t么i ***. ***, m峄檛 t峄 ch峄ヽ tuy峄僴 d峄g 膽瓢峄 c岷 ph茅p 峄 Columbia, Maryland, chuy锚n v峄 tuy峄僴 d峄g v脿 膽瓢a ng瓢峄漣 lao 膽峄檔g n瓢峄沜 ngo脿i v脿o c么ng ty Hoa K峄 th么ng qua nh岷璸 c瓢 Vi峄嘽 l脿m- Theo di峄噉 Visa (EB-3). Qua qu谩 tr矛nh l脿m vi峄嘽, c谩c 峄﹏g vi锚n l脿 ng瓢峄漣 lao 膽峄檔g n瓢峄沜 ngo脿i c贸 th峄 膽瓢峄 c岷 Th岷 Xanh.

*** C贸 h峄 膽峄搉g v峄沬 nhi峄乽 nh脿 tuy峄僴 d峄g M峄 膽ang thi岷縰 lao 膽峄檔g v脿 c贸 ngu峄搉 doanh thu 峄昻 膽峄媙h.

Trong h啤n 25 n膬m, *** 膽茫 tuy峄僴 d峄g v脿 ki岷縩 鈥嬧媙gh峄 gi煤p lao 膽峄檔g c贸 tay ngh峄 v脿 lao 膽峄檔g ph峄 th么ng nh岷眒 膽谩p 峄﹏g nguy峄噉 v峄峮g c峄 ng瓢峄漣 lao 膽峄檔g. *** 膽茫 mang l岷 h啤n 20.000 ng瓢峄漣 lao 膽峄檔g v脿 gia 膽矛nh h峄 t峄 H脿n Qu峄慶 v脿 Trung Qu峄慶 sang l脿m vi峄嘽 v脿 sinh s峄憂g t岷 Hoa K峄. C么ng ty ch煤ng t么i v脿 ch峄 s峄 h峄痷 膽瓢峄 ghi nh岷璶 l脿 m峄檛 trong s峄 nh峄痭g c么ng ty l芒u 膽峄漣 nh岷 trong ng脿nh c么ng nghi峄噋 n脿y.

*** 膼ang m峄 r峄檔g kinh doanh sang Vi峄噒 Nam v脿 mong mu峄憂 膽瓢峄 h峄 t谩c v峄沬 c谩c 膽啤n v峄 uy t铆n t岷 Vi峄噒 Nam trong qu谩 tr矛nh tuy峄僴 d峄g.

Ch煤ng t么i mong nh岷璶 膽瓢峄 ph岷 h峄搃 t峄 qu媒 膽啤n v峄 v脿 hy v峄峮g m峄檛 m峄慽 quan h峄 膽么i b锚n c霉ng c贸 l峄.

狈岷縰 c贸 b岷 k峄 c芒u h峄廼 n脿o, xin vui l貌ng li锚n h峄 v峄沬 ch煤ng t么i.

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Jen Kim

Oh Wow!! I really didn't expect to get a reply but what a pleasant surprise!!
You are very kind and smart and I truly appreciate your time and effort to review the translation for us.
With your help, we have better approach of our company instruction and Vietnamese client will have better understanding. Thank you so much! Hope you have an amazing day!!听 :top:

Best regards,
Jen

wildnfree

you're welcomed.

I look forward to seeing the company's partnership development here, and I may be the company future customer.听 :D

pls let me know the news if it is possible.

TVBZ28

Let me try this:

[i]xin vui l貌ng li锚n h峄 v峄沬 ch煤ng t么i..[/i]
Tr瓢峄沜 h岷縯, t么i xin 膽峄媙h ngh末a l岷 c谩i danh t峄 "li锚n h峄" m脿 膽a s峄 ng瓢峄漣 Vi峄噒 g岷 膽芒y th瓢峄漬g hay d霉ng sai ngh末a, v矛 hai ch峄 "li锚n h峄" 膽瓢峄 d霉ng trong ph岷 vi quan h峄 gi峄痑 ng瓢峄漣 v脿 ng瓢峄漣 - th铆 d峄 nh瓢 "ch煤ng t么i c贸 s峄 li锚n h峄 v峄沬 nhau v矛 c霉ng l脿 anh em" (ch峄 em, hay b脿 con, h峄 h脿ng, v.v...).
Trong ph瓢啤ng di峄噉 giao t岷, truy峄乶 th么ng hay ti岷縫 x煤c听 thi ph岷 d霉ng danh t峄 "li锚n l岷" - nh瓢 "n岷縰 mu峄憂 li锚n l岷 v峄沬 t么i, xin h茫y g峄峣 s峄 膽i峄噉 tho岷 123456".

Khi n贸i v峄 hai (ho岷穋 nhi峄乽) s峄 ki峄噉 c贸 li锚n 膽峄沬, 岷h h瓢峄焠g v峄沬 nhau th矛 ng瓢峄漣 ta l岷 d霉ng ch峄 li锚n quan ho岷穋 "li锚n 膽峄沬". Th铆 d峄 nh瓢 "Ph岷, chuy峄噉 膽贸 c贸 li锚n quan 膽岷縩 t么i".

Translation:
Many Vietnamese nowadays often confused about the phrase "lien he", which they should use the correct words as "lien lac", because "lien he" mostly being used in area of personal relationship, not for communication just as the phrase "lien lac" is being used to indicate someone to contact with someone else.


tuy峄僴 d峄g v脿 ki岷縩 鈥嬧媙gh峄 =听 recruit and provided recommendation
Ki岷縩 ngh峄 峄 膽芒y c贸 ngh末a l脿 膽瓢a ra hay 膽峄 ngh峄 m峄檛 媒 ki岷縩 ,s谩ng ki岷縩 ho岷穋 l脿 m峄檛 l峄漣 khuy锚n
"Ki岷縩 ngh峄" means provides suggestion or recommendation.

IDI has helped employers recruit and petition for skilled and unskilled workers to satisfy their labor needs.

c贸 th峄 膽瓢峄 thay th岷 v峄沬 c芒u d瓢峄沬 膽芒y ( much better with the sentence below - including a missing comma to separate 2 events, and a dash"-" to distinct the "needs" between workers and employers ):

IDI has helped employers recruit, and provided recommendation for skilled and unskilled workers - to satisfy their labor needs.


*** has contracts with multiple U.S. employers who have labor shortages and a consistent rolling turnover rate.
Hai ch峄 "has contracts" kh么ng n贸 r玫 chi ti岷縯 l脿 trong kho岷g th峄漣 gian n脿o, c么ng ty XXX 膽茫 c贸 hay v岷玭 膽ang c贸 nh峄痭g h峄 膽峄搉g (contracts). 狈岷縰 d霉ng ch峄 "currently" - ngh末a l脿 mu峄憂 nh岷 m岷h 峄 膽i峄僲 l脿 c么ng ty XXX 膽ang c贸 nh峄痭g h峄 膽峄搉g ch峄 kh么ng ph岷 膽贸 ch峄 l脿 chuy峄噉 qu谩 kh峄, nay c贸 th峄 膽茫 kh么ng c貌n nh峄痭g h峄 膽峄搉g n脿o n峄痑. Cho n锚n, nguy锚n c芒u sau 膽芒y s岷 nh岷 m岷h v峄 c谩i 瓢u 膽i峄僲 n脿y (the word "Currently" helps emphasis the time frame when the company has experience about a subject )
currently contracts with multiple U.S. employers, who have labor shortages and a consistent rolling turnover rate.听


狈岷縰 c贸 b岷 k峄 c芒u h峄廼 n脿o, xin vui l貌ng li锚n h峄 v峄沬 ch煤ng t么i.
Hay h啤n (or better) v矛 膽茫 nh岷痗 t峄沬 ch峄 膽峄 (adding s峄jective of "who") trong 膽贸:
狈岷縰 qu媒 v峄 c贸 b岷 k峄 c芒u h峄廼 n脿o, xin h茫y vui l貌ng li锚n l岷听 v峄沬 ch煤ng t么i.
(If you have any question or concern, please feel free to contact us.)

Jen Kim

Thanks to you! We actually got multiple replies from Vietnam agencies!!听 :D
You have no idea how much you helped us to get this deal, I can't thank you enough for your kind support!

If you are really interested in applying this visa, after we set up the agreement with agencies, I can give you the contact information so you can get the detail from Vietnam agency. I will keep you updated.听 :top:

Again, Thank you so much! Hope you have a great day!!

Jen